Medival Love (My Story)

I'm starting a story:
Me: Spongella
Max: Max (lol)
Hannajean: Jeana (Gee-an-a)
Manatee6: Manty
Cheroes: Cheerol (Sher-ol)
Dane Ice1: D-Ice
Hekee: Hellekee (hes an old friend thats gone)

One day Spongella wondered out into the woods. Her mom told her to go get blueberrys. Of course she didn't. She was getting really tired and sat down near a tree. She looked up and shaded her eyes to see the biggest treehouse ever. A penguin flying smashed into it and slid down. Spongella giggled but ran to see if the penguin was ok. It was her best friend, Cheerol! "Are you ok Cheerol?!" she asked. "Just a little dizzy" Cheerol said spinning around. "Woah" she said "Nice treehouse!". "It's not mine Cheerol! I was wondering and found it. Shall we go in?" Spongella said. It was the Medival times but the treehouse didn't look old at all. Cheerol started climbing up and when she got to the top she screamed. Spongella raced after her, "Are you ok!?". "Yeah!! Spongella you need to get up here, its the best!!" Cheerol cried. Spongella and Cheerol stared at the beautiful treehouse. In the corner was a handsome prince, widdling a beautiful bird. He looked up and said, "Thieves!"he shouted and pressed a button. A metal cage fell down and locked around us. "We aren't thieves! I swear! We found this and we were admiring it.. it's awesome! May I have your name?" Spongella said. "Max" he said looking down. "HELLEKEE!!" Max cried. A boy in a filthy suit appeared out of nowhere. "Yes your majesty?". "Why is he saying that when we already have a...." Cheerol stopped dead as they saw out of the corner of their eyes the queen, Jeana tied up and a piece of tape on her mouth dangling. I stared at Hellekee. He wasn't good, like Max was, he was hiding something. The only was was that they didn't know what.